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April 22, 2017 By Jim Kacian 57 Comments

Alan Summers — Touchstone Award Winner

Alan Summers is a recipient of a Touchstone Individual Poem Award for 2016 for his poem

house clearance
room by room by room
my mother disappears

It first appeared in Blithe Spirit 26.1.

See the complete list of winners of both Individual Poem Awards and Distinguished Books Awards in the Touchstone Archives.

Filed Under: Touchstone Awards Tagged With: Alan Summers, The Haiku Foundation, The Touchstone Awards for Individual Poems

Comments

  1. Alan Summers says

    November 23, 2017 at 11:05 am

    Wonderful commentary from the judges, thank you so much!
    .
    house clearance
    room by room by room
    my mother disappears
    .
    Alan Summers
    Blithe Spirit 26.1 (March 2016)
    Shortlisted for Museum of Haiku Literature Blithe Spirit 26.2 (May 2016)
    .
    Touchstone Award Winner 2016
    .
    “When I read haiku, I’m looking for an unexpected view on the well-known. I’m curious to learn about an open secret (after Robert Spiess). I’m looking for a simple (but not banal) and lucid language that expresses something extraordinary within the ordinary, something which I never read before in that way as well as something that is of beauty beyond time. ‘house clearance’ represents the pure power of haiku. Layers of meaning ascending from deeper layers of the mind (‘room by room by room’) in relation to existential truth (‘my mother disappears’). Perhaps one finds a human contradiction: memories can only get preserved vividly after “clearance.”
    .
    “An emotional and vivid image that brings sadness at first reading while effectively pointing out that taking away the physical doesn’t remove the memory.”
    .
    Further commentaries:
    https://www.thehaikufoundation.org/2017/04/30/commentaries-for-the-2016-touchstone-awards/
    .

    Reply
  2. Judith says

    September 20, 2017 at 8:55 am

    Alan, Congratulations. You deserve this and many more.

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      September 21, 2017 at 12:10 pm

      .
      Thank you Judi!
      .
      You have been such a great supporter over the years.
      .
      my warmest of best wishes,
      .
      Alan

      Reply
  3. Yu Yan says

    July 4, 2017 at 5:25 am

    Alan, I am deeply touched…

    Congratulations!

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      July 16, 2017 at 7:34 pm

      Thank you Yu Yan!

      As an amazing poet yourself, that’s one heck of a compliment.

      warmest regards,

      Alan

      Reply
  4. Adjei Agyei-Baah says

    April 24, 2017 at 10:58 pm

    Congrats Alan. A great piece born out of reminiscence and touching memories. Though the umbilical cord is always severed, mother and child relationship indeed remain unbroken.

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 25, 2017 at 5:24 am

      Thank you Adjel!
      .
      I deeply appreciate your comments. Our mothers are important, they shape us don’t they?
      .
      warmest regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  5. Michael Virga says

    April 24, 2017 at 2:21 pm

     
    Congrats, Alan Summers, a master of the haiku-poem

     
    emotionally potent – resonating a Universal chord
     

     
    Following the master, I also heard/experienced “re-appearance”:
     
    house clearance
    yet room by room by room
    mother reappears
     

     
    Thanks, Mr. Summers, for sharing & inspiring —
     

    in Heaven
    all the colors appear
    clear

    Michael (MV)   http://ibpc.webdelsol.com/poems/disrobing-the-ghost
      

     
     
     
     
      
     
     

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    • Alan Summers says

      April 24, 2017 at 5:27 pm

      Thanks Michael, and I love your poem with allusions to Buson etc… Wonderful!
      .
      Thank you for your wonderful poetry, and your kind comments, deeply appreciated.
      .
      warm regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  6. Roberta Beary says

    April 24, 2017 at 12:34 pm

    Congrats on your Touchstone award for this outstanding haiku Alan. I will always recall your kindness as you and I traversed the same path with our mothers.

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 24, 2017 at 1:11 pm

      Thank you Roberta!
      .
      Three mothers between us, as I finally got to meet my original birth mother. Our mothers are such a strong presence.
      .
      Hope to meet up with you somewhere in the world, things are just starting to turn around for Karen and myself. 🙂
      .
      warmest of regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  7. gennady Nov says

    April 24, 2017 at 5:50 am

    Congratulations, my dear friend!!!

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 24, 2017 at 6:39 am

      Thank you gennady!

      As you know I am a fan of your work, so I am double blessed. 🙂
      .
      warm regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  8. Chrissi Villa says

    April 24, 2017 at 3:48 am

    I can relate to this. This is a very powerful haiku, Alan! I was hoping you would win. Congratulations! By the way, where is the list of the top 5? Wondering if Frameless Sky (poem by Michele L. Harvey) is among them.

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 24, 2017 at 6:09 am

      Thank you Chrissi! 🙂 That is really most kind of you..
      .
      The final five winners isn’t in a separate post just yet but you can see and link onto individual pages here: https://www.thehaikufoundation.org/tag/the-touchstone-awards-for-individual-poems/
      .
      Michele’s poem was also wonderful! There were so many good poems.
      .
      warm regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  9. Vidya says

    April 24, 2017 at 2:47 am

    Across cultures and continents, I can relate to this haiku. Beautiful.
    Mother and the house : how deeply interwoven they are!

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 24, 2017 at 5:22 am

      Thank you Vidya! 🙂
      .
      Your comment makes this all the more successful. Thank you so much, deeply appreciated.
      .
      warmest regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  10. Carlos says

    April 23, 2017 at 8:14 pm

    Sorry to hear about your mom, Alan. I imagine she was very proud of you.

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 24, 2017 at 5:21 am

      Thank you Carlos,
      .
      We had a difficult relationship most of our life, but in the end she recognised I was always there for her, and we had a great last few years.
      .
      And she even grew proud of my poetry achievements in the end. We came from working class background so getting a trade was always more important.
      .
      warm regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  11. Rebecca Drouilhet says

    April 23, 2017 at 6:28 pm

    Outstanding haiku, Alan. Congratulations on your win. The beauty and poignancy of this poem are enhanced for me by knowing about your personal journey losing two mothers. So many of us can relate to this theme and appreciate how well you articulate a sense of loss for the rest of us.

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 23, 2017 at 7:20 pm

      Dear Rebecca,
      .
      Thank you for your comment! Yes, both my mothers died within two weeks of each other. One in Britain, and one in Western Australia. I was able to share grief and condolences with my half-sister in Australia.
      .
      warm regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  12. Barbara Kaufmann says

    April 23, 2017 at 5:03 pm

    I loved this the first time I read it and it still resonates upon rereading. Congratulations! Well deserved!

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 23, 2017 at 6:02 pm

      Wow, thank you Barbara! It’s great to know. So often we don’t know that readers, and other poets, love our work. Bless you!
      .
      warm regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  13. Nola Borrell says

    April 23, 2017 at 4:05 pm

    Out of sadness, this happy moment. … In your memory, you will have your mother firmly in residence. Nola

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 23, 2017 at 6:01 pm

      Thanks Nola, she would have loved the fact that I won an award.
      .
      warm regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  14. Marion Clarke says

    April 23, 2017 at 2:56 pm

    Alan, I have loved this poem from the first time I read it. I know you are so busy teaching that you probably don’t get a chance to write and enter as many of your own haiku as you would like, so it’s great to see your work being recognised. Well done!

    marion

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 23, 2017 at 5:47 pm

      Thank you Marion! 🙂
      .
      Yes, you are right, I rarely get time to write my own work, so this was an amazing piece of news.
      .
      warm regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  15. Mary Weiler says

    April 23, 2017 at 10:46 am

    Brilliant! and well deserved Alan. One of my favorites.
    Take care, Mary

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 23, 2017 at 1:37 pm

      Thank you, and thank you for your great support! 🙂
      .
      warm regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  16. Michele L. Harvey says

    April 23, 2017 at 9:55 am

    Perfectly expressed and well done! Congratulations Alan. Well-deserved!

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 23, 2017 at 1:36 pm

      Thank you! Deeply appreciated.
      .
      Alan

      Reply
  17. Valentina Ranaldi-Adams says

    April 23, 2017 at 9:40 am

    the concept is well-expressed

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 23, 2017 at 1:36 pm

      Thank you!
      Alan

      Reply
  18. Mojde says

    April 23, 2017 at 8:34 am

    Congratulation Mr. Summers!

    Mother!
    disappearing from the boundaries of a room, to appear in seeds of a thought, World Wide.
    Power of haiku
    ———-
    Best wishes from Iran.
    may your mother rest in peace.

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 23, 2017 at 1:36 pm

      Thank you for your kind thoughts.
      .
      warm regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  19. David Jacobs says

    April 23, 2017 at 3:34 am

    as well as the emotional content, such a well crafted haiku. The three uses of the word ‘room’ and the final word ‘disappears’ did it for me

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 23, 2017 at 5:37 am

      Thank you David!
      .
      It was wonderful meeting up against yesterday. Karen had good timing as we caught the last train back home, as the others would have been buses.
      .
      Once our home is no longer filled with thousands of boxes and chaos, I hope you will visit! 🙂
      .
      Thank you for your kind words. It is rare for me to show my emotions in my work, but I wanted a tribute to my mother, and she would be thrilled. In her last years she was very proud of my achievements in writing haiku, and would have loved this award.
      .
      The haiku is very true to my experience. It was an eerie experience disappearing a parent who filled and dominated that house. I was always amazed and proud that she adored what was a very modern 1970s house designed by the architect who made it his home for a few brief years until a family breakup alas. My mother was a hidden artist, always under pressure to keep to her trades, but the few signs I saw, she was very gifted. I think she finally recognised it was okay for me to pursue my dreams and not just a trade, they can go together. 🙂
      .
      warm regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  20. Mary Kendall says

    April 23, 2017 at 3:13 am

    Alan, this poem is so deeply moving and true for you and for so many of us who have been in a similar position. This honour is so well deserved. Congratulations!

    ~ Mary

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 23, 2017 at 5:32 am

      Thank you Mary!
      .
      It was great meeting you last year, and although we couldn’t this year, I have a feeling you will be back in England soon! 🙂
      .
      Thank you for your kind comments, it was an extraordinary feeling to see my mother, such a force of nature, literally disappear room by room by room. Her home meant so much for her, as she started full time work at 14 years of age, and always worked incredibly hard.
      .
      warm regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  21. SamarGhose says

    April 23, 2017 at 12:45 am

    Congratulations Alan!

    Yes a special poem which will resonate powerfully with many.
    I remember it with a mix of sorrow and fondness too.

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 23, 2017 at 5:29 am

      Thank you Samar!
      .
      Although the haiku is about my adoptive mother, my birth mother died two weeks later too, in Perth, Western Australia. I was glad I was able to finally meet her a few years ago.
      .
      Thank you for your kind comments, deeply appreciated.
      .
      warm regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  22. Bubbly says

    April 23, 2017 at 12:15 am

    congratulations!

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 23, 2017 at 5:28 am

      Thank you, and great to see you on your own haiku journey too!
      .
      warm regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  23. Vibeke Laier says

    April 22, 2017 at 8:53 pm

    Congratulations, Alan!

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 23, 2017 at 5:27 am

      Thank you!
      .
      warm regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  24. Jan Benson says

    April 22, 2017 at 8:51 pm

    Well Done Alan
    Jan

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 23, 2017 at 5:27 am

      Thank you!
      .
      warm regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  25. Dave Read says

    April 22, 2017 at 7:58 pm

    A very powerful haiku Alan. Congratulations! Well deserved.

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 23, 2017 at 4:55 am

      Thanks Dave!
      .
      warm regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  26. Susan Beth Furst says

    April 22, 2017 at 6:33 pm

    Alan
    What a great honor and what a special poem. It is one of those that you don’t forget just like your mum…

    Susan

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 22, 2017 at 7:09 pm

      Thank you Susan,
      .
      Your comments are greatly appreciated, and even more so after your own great loss not so very long ago.
      .
      warmest regards,
      .
      Alan

      Reply
  27. Peter Newton says

    April 22, 2017 at 5:36 pm

    A simultaneous feeling of wandering and loss and wandering lost. Potent. The clarity (via such clearances) that comes to us as we get older. Congratulations Alan. All best. –Peter

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 22, 2017 at 6:17 pm

      Thank you Peter,
      .
      Yes, a straight direct experience, stripped down, just as the probate process from my side meant erasing my mother’s presence from the house, in order to put up the home for sale, to pay death taxes.
      .
      The house, when bought back in the 1970s, was a major achievement for my parents, as it cost so much money. Also my mother embraced the radical design of the house (designed and lived in by the architect).
      .
      When my mother was too ill we had to move her to a safe medical place, but I made sure she had many years at that house before that.
      .
      Thank you for your comments, they are genuinely appreciated.
      .
      warmest regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  28. martin gottlieb cohen says

    April 22, 2017 at 2:07 pm

    Wow!
    .
    All the Best,
    martin

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 22, 2017 at 6:13 pm

      Thanks Martin, your comment is deeply appreciated!
      .
      warm regards,
      Alan

      Reply
  29. Frank J. Tassone says

    April 22, 2017 at 1:00 pm

    Congratulations, Alan!

    Reply
    • Alan Summers says

      April 22, 2017 at 6:13 pm

      Thank you Frank, deeply appreciated!
      .
      warm regards,
      Alan

      Reply

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